TOEFL Write for an Academic Discussion: structure, scoring and examples

Write for an Academic Discussion is the one task on the TOEFL where you are asked for an opinion and expected to argue it. You have ten minutes, a professor's question, and two classmates who have already said something. What you write is judged on whether it contributes, not on whether it agrees with anyone.

What is the Write for an Academic Discussion task?

ETS describes it this way: you state and support an opinion within an online class discussion forum. A post from the professor briefly frames the topic and poses an opinion question for the class. Brief posts from two students give different positions on the issue. You then contribute your own position, supporting it with your own reasoning, experiences or knowledge. ETS says test takers have 10 minutes, and you type your response on a computer keyboard.

What does ETS's own sample prompt say?

ETS's sample is a social studies class. The prompt tells you to write a post responding to the professor's question, and to do two things: express and support your opinion, and make a contribution to the discussion in your own words. It ends with the sentence "An effective response will contain at least 100 words."

The professor's post asks whether high school students should be required to do volunteer work. One student says yes, because it builds civic responsibility. The other says no, because many students have limited free time. Both are short and clear, which is the pattern: two positions, an open question, and room for a third view.

How is Write for an Academic Discussion scored?

ETS scores it from 0 to 5. The guide for the top score describes a relevant and very clearly expressed contribution to the online discussion that shows consistent facility in the use of language. Typical features are relevant and well-elaborated explanations, exemplifications and details, effective use of a variety of syntactic structures and precise word choice, and almost no errors beyond those expected from a competent writer working under timed conditions.

Two points from the guide matter for how you write. For a 1, ETS describes a response where "any coherent language is mostly borrowed from the stimulus", and a response entirely copied from the prompt scores 0. Contribute in your own words. ETS's blueprint lists the task as AI scored, with a maximum of 5 points. Scores on ScoreFluent are practice estimates, not official results.

What does a score of 5 look like?

ETS's score-5 sample answers the volunteering question in about 120 words. It opens by acknowledging one student's point and stating its own position in the same sentence. It gives a reason, suggests how the objection could be handled (flexible options such as weekend or summer volunteering), adds a second reason, and then gives a personal example: helping to create a community garden. It closes with a one-line conclusion.

ETS's comment says the response is a relevant and very clearly expressed contribution, and that its minimal errors, such as a missing article, are typical of what one might expect from even the most capable writers in a first draft. The point for you is that a top-scoring answer does not need to be perfect. It needs to be relevant, developed and clear.

What is the best structure for ten minutes?

1. Read the question and both posts, and choose a position (first minute or two). You can agree with one student, take a middle line or disagree with both. Pick the position you can support best, not the one you believe most.
2. Open with your position and a nod to one post. "I agree with Claire that..., although Andrew is right that..." does two jobs in one sentence: it shows you read the discussion and it states your view.
3. Give a reason and develop it. One reason with an explanation and an example scores better than three reasons with none.
4. Add something the students did not say. The prompt asks you to contribute in your own words, so a new angle, a personal experience or a concrete example is what separates a contribution from a summary.
5. Deal with the other side. Answer the strongest objection in a sentence or two. It shows control of the argument.
6. Finish with a one-sentence conclusion and proofread. Leave a minute to check articles, tenses and agreement.

Treat the timings as our suggestion for practice. ETS publishes only the ten-minute total.

How long should the response be?

ETS's sample prompt says an effective response will contain at least 100 words, so that is the floor. ETS's overview gives no maximum, and its score-5 sample runs to about 120 words. Our model answers run from 123 to 164 words. A response of roughly 120 to 170 words, well organised, is a realistic target for ten minutes. That range is our benchmark, not an ETS figure.

What mistakes cost the most marks?

• Repeating a student's point. Restating what has already been said is not a contribution.
• Staying neutral. The task asks you to state and support an opinion.
• No example. A claim with no explanation or example is under-elaborated.
• Copying phrases from the posts. ETS's guide penalises language borrowed from the stimulus.
• Falling under 100 words. ETS says an effective response contains at least that many.
• An opening that takes a minute to start. Put the position in the first sentence.

Write for an Academic Discussion practice items

Practice items from the ScoreFluent bank (not real exam questions). Three discussions from three subject areas, ordered from easiest to hardest by our own difficulty rating. Write your own response in ten minutes before opening the model answer. The model answers run from 123 to 164 words.

Discussion 1: Introduction to Sociology

Professor Reyes: Many university students must decide where to live. Some choose to share an apartment with roommates, and others pay more to live alone. Each choice changes a person's money, studies, and social life. Which is better for a university student: living with roommates or living alone?

Chen: Living with roommates is better for me. Rent is much cheaper when you share it, and students do not have much money. Roommates can also become good friends, and you are not alone when you feel stressed. I learned to cook and clean with them.

Sofia: I prefer living alone. My apartment is quiet, so I can study whenever I want. I do not need to worry about other people's noise, visitors, or dirty dishes. It costs more, but I sleep well and I get better grades. Living alone gives me peace.

Write a post responding to Professor Reyes's question. Express and support your opinion, and make a contribution in your own words.

Model answer and explanation

I think living with roommates is the better choice for most students, although Sofia makes a fair point about quiet. Chen is right that sharing rent saves a lot of money, and money is a big problem for many students. When I lived alone for one year, I paid almost half of my income for rent, and I worked extra hours instead of studying.

Also, roommates give us support. If I am sick or worried about an exam, someone is at home. Sofia says that noise hurts her grades, and that can be true. But students can solve this problem by making simple rules, such as quiet hours after ten o'clock, or by studying in the library. In the end, the lower cost and the friendships are more important to me than a silent apartment. Students who live together also learn to talk about problems and work with other people, and that skill is useful after graduation.

Why it works. Chooses a side and still acknowledges the other view, responds to Chen and Sofia by name, and backs the opinion with a personal example and a realistic solution.

Discussion 2: Higher Education Policy

Dr. Bennett: Suppose your university receives an unexpected budget surplus this year. Some people argue it should go toward need-based financial aid so more students can afford to attend, while others believe it should be spent on updating labs, libraries, and technology that benefit every student already enrolled. If you were advising the university, which priority would you recommend, and why?

Priya: I'd put the money toward financial aid. A university can have the best labs in the country, but none of that matters to a student who can't afford tuition in the first place. Expanding aid means more students get access to those same labs at all, which seems like the more fundamental problem to solve first.

Owen: I'd lean toward infrastructure instead. Aid helps individual students, but outdated labs and slow internet in the library affect literally everyone on campus, including the students already receiving aid. If the equipment is falling behind, the quality of every student's education drops a little, even if tuition itself isn't the barrier.

Write a post responding to Dr. Bennett's question. Express and support your opinion, and make a contribution in your own words.

Model answer and explanation

I would recommend splitting the surplus rather than committing it entirely to one priority, but if I had to weigh them, I would lean slightly toward Priya's position. Owen is correct that outdated facilities affect every student, but a facilities gap is a matter of degree — students can still learn in an older lab — while an affordability gap can mean a qualified student never enrolls at all.

That said, Owen's point about infrastructure affecting students who are already receiving aid is a fair one, so I would not ignore it entirely. A reasonable compromise might allocate the larger share to aid, since it addresses the more fundamental barrier, while still setting aside a smaller portion for the most urgently outdated equipment.

Why it works. Rather than simply agreeing with one classmate, it directly compares the severity of the two problems ('a matter of degree' versus 'never enrolls at all') to justify a position, and proposes a concrete compromise instead of a vague summary.

Discussion 3: Theories of Art

Professor Laurent: Artificial intelligence programs can now produce images and music in the style of well-known artists. Some see this as a new creative tool, while others regard it as theft from human creators. Should work produced by AI be considered legitimate art?

Claire: AI-generated work can be legitimate art because art depends on the human intention and selection behind it. A person who writes prompts, refines results, and chooses the final piece makes creative decisions, just as photographers choose framing and light. New technologies have always been criticized before gaining acceptance.

Dmitri: I disagree. These systems are trained on millions of works by human artists, often without permission, and then generate imitations. Producing a polished image without skill, experience, or struggle is different from creating art. The emotional depth of human work comes from lived experience, which a program does not have.

Write a post responding to Professor Laurent's question. Express and support your opinion, and make a contribution in your own words.

Model answer and explanation

I think AI-assisted work can qualify as art, but the conditions of its creation raise ethical questions that Dmitri is right to emphasize. Claire's comparison with photography is apt. When cameras first appeared, many critics argued that they merely recorded reality, yet photographers demonstrated that choices of composition, timing, and subject carry real artistic intent. A person who directs an AI tool with a clear vision and revises it carefully is making similar judgments.

However, Dmitri's concern about training data is serious. If a system is built on the labor of artists who never consented and receive no payment, then its outputs rest on an unfair foundation, regardless of how impressive they appear. The solution is not to deny that the results can be art, but to require licensing, transparency about sources, and fair compensation for the creators whose work is used. Art has always evolved with technology; what matters is that the people whose creativity makes the technology possible are respected within it.

Why it works. Separates the question of artistic status from the question of ethics, uses the photography analogy to engage Claire, answers Dmitri by name, and offers a clear, policy-oriented conclusion in sophisticated language.

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Where do these facts come from?

Task description, timing, word-count wording, scoring guide and samples come from the ETS Updated TOEFL iBT Test Overview, the ETS TOEFL iBT Writing page and the 2026 Test Blueprint and Specifications. Checked 15 and 16 October 2026. ETS notes that the blueprint was subject to minor revisions until launch, so check ets.org before test day. ScoreFluent is not affiliated with or endorsed by ETS, and the scores we give are practice estimates, not official results.

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